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Heartbeat

heartbeat,
soft glowing rhythm,
thinking, feeling, leaping
sound, orchestrated vibration  
throbbing


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  • leo2
    August 7, 2008

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    I know the feeling well. When that special someone provides the spark to start the music.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


    • FransB gold member
      August 7, 2008
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      It's always good

      to have you visit my page and I enjoy your comments. Hope that you are fine? Frans


  • Sandygram silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    From USA to SA

    This was so beautiful Frans. You do have a way with words. You say so much in a few lines. Excellent write. Lovely imagery of a heartbeat. Thank you for sharing. Glad you are home safe and sound. Hugs and Smiles. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.

    Blessings For you,
    Sandy


    • FransB gold member
      August 7, 2008
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      Thank you

      Sandy. Too little time for 'long' poems, but there is still a need to write. Have a wonderful day. Frans


      • Sandygram silver member
        August 7, 2008
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        I am so glad you keep writing. They are short and sweet and always a delight to read. Bless you, Sandy

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