Bye Bye..
this is the day
that i die and the time
when you DONT cry...
you didn't want me
around and when i was
you frowned..
i nealry drowned i nealry
drowned in my tears!
trying not to think about all my
childish hopes and fears.
you screwed me up mum ,
thats the thing i wish
you never done....
i find a locket pull it out
your dirty poket..
its got picture of you and dad
that makes me mad cus you still love him..
when he left .. he went
in 2004 and now we don't
see him anymore..
you caused my life hell
all the bad things that i used dwell on
yeah well now im gone.
i hope you get to read this note
so all the words get stuck in your throat!
so cold, so hurt why did you treat me like dirt??
bye bye mom i know you hated me being there
well lets just say you didn't CARE!
did you like my poem if so please comment...
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you caused my life hell
all the bad things that i used dwell on
yeah well now im gone.
i wrote something like this directed towards my ex instead of my parents -
wow, powerfull..great write xx
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This has so much emotion. Sadness, anger. Wow. The way you wrote was really amazing as well. It wasn't as cliched as I thought it was going to be, the category beaing suicide and all. You portrayed this really well. Keep writing!!
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i guess i wrote ok but it was a suicide note in a way... thanks for the comment
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Yes I loved your poem. There is so much emotion and such sadness. Even if you mom doesn't care, I do.
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