i wanna walk on water
and so on the moon's crater
having a beer in my hand
a head-band
and a ray ban
to support
my eyes from the nature's fort
i wanna fly in the thin air
to see whether the sky is fair
to eye the orgin
of the sky's gin
named rain
which washes the earth's stain
i wanna eat the mountains
and drink the fountains
and say in the past and present tense
that nature is no fence
to my eating and drinking sense
i wanna grip the reader
with my poetic-fervor
relieving him of himself
transporting him to a newself
where you brush lava and eat volcano
this is afterall an imagination you meano
A contest entry
- Fun!! by Poemdancer.
800 points, ended August 10, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was a very interesting poem with some very beautiful words that sat together wonderfully. You look way beyond the norm and reach out into the far horizons to gain your inspiration, that is clearly seen in this poem. A top write. No changes or corrections neccessary.
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Interesting write, nice rhyme...thank you for entering my contest!
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to eye the orgin
of the sky's gin
named rain
which washes the earth's stain
what clever lines these are! thinking of rain as the sky's gin
lol. Nice job. Glad I found you poet.
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