He came to stand just behind her,
fingertips exploring the curves
of breasts, her ribs gliding slowly
down across stomach, pulling back
against the hard, urgent length.
Touch was fever hot, harder as hands
curved round the front of her thighs,
she felt heart pounding, lips burned
against the nape of her neck, sent slow,
liquid fire spiralling down backbone,
shuddered and threw a hand up, burying
her fingers in his thick hairs silently.
A crazy thing, begging for heartache,
running to meet with each of them,
wanting something so different unusual.
She turned in the tight circle of his arms,
her lips parting, and his fingers finding
the slide of zipper between her breasts.
She wanted that zipper opened, her breasts rose
with a deep, sobbing breath, pressing up
against the weight of his hand, slow, slow
as the deliberate, rippling tick of zipper.
Goosebumps rising everywhere, nipples aching
for a touch, leaned back against the wall,
shuddering as his lips found her throat,
burned their slow, melting way down her body,
teeth bit her gently through the lace,
grasp echoed, hands closed around the back
of his head, pulling him closer.
Dizzy, dizzier..floating now as he lifted her
spinning as his heart beating against her side,
whole body throbbing to its rhythm, so safe, so warm.
" I'm the one that loves you,"
her lips curving in a catlike, laughing smile,
with a secret monologue...
" You will, yes, you will."
Author notes
Contest Touch me with your words
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Prompt: http://doomsday-dawn.deviantart.com/art/Erotic-Rain-35858897
A contest entry
- Touch me with your words. by Ho74pp1eP1e.
525 points, ended September 2, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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A very intene and sensual poem that was a pleasure to read. Best of luck, and thanks for entering.
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No bad language...
....with bursting emotions interacting.
Lol
...and the poet so engrossed in this lovely work, thinks to analyze the oldest and dazzling world of love without enjoying it.
Even Gods have tried to become human to fall in love.
May he find the real meaning of true love to blow up in raptures of joy.
A lovely beautiful imaginative write.
Congrats.
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amazing
all i can really say -
Holy wow, I loved this! Just left me wanting so much more. I was just like awww thats it, more, more, more. lol this is very sexual, and sensual. I think I have said these very words to a lover, and always the truth me told. Well done.
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