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Connection, disconnected

twosome-tech
profile check
we connect
id names
hotmail, aol, YM

and Skype
this must be the hype

surfing me
googled me
im me
chat online
you say hi, how are you,
i say hi and i'm fine

the usual pick-up lines

web cam broadcasts
now we're having a blast
times flies so fast
animated facial expressions
emoticons
in type written forms

flirty talks
we're kind of stalking...
looking love in the cyberwold
kinda perverse...
but you just rock my universe

 

single?

courtship...

relationship?

the 21st century way

these broadband days


are you still there?

[pc] froze
guess you're gone...

 

 

Anna Lee

6, aug'08




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blah moments...
just because i got dc...darn pc, darn connection

lol

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  • kishi-tenshi
    March 26, 2009

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    I enjoy reading this...

    I love the truth behind this write and how you perfectly pulled into a synchronize flow, hahah

    words are simple but perfectly enough to captivate any reader's eyes....

    I love this


    • sense surreal
      March 26, 2009
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      kishi...thank you sa pagbisita mo sa page
      glad that it made you laugh lol


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    A way to get out there in the comforts of your own home.
    It's nice to know you can have your heart torn online as well.
    Just another way to be happy in the land of wally world.
    Though I know so many kind souls do to the net.
    I enjoy it, but I mostly do allpoetry, and maybe yahoo IM's.
    That about sums that up. lol. Thanks for sharing you.

    -Timothy


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Great take on our virtual culture -- sometimes the friendships online are as powerful as offline! Gotta get the web names and sites before losing the connections, though! This was fun to read!


  • Tony El Great
    September 9, 2008
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    They didn't post the applause's I clicked, not even on edit, ah computers.


    • sense surreal
      September 10, 2008
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      Thank you Tony for dropping by my page and commenting on my write...much appreciated.

      And I got the clapping yellow dude.

      Anna Lee


  • Tony El Great
    September 9, 2008

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    Bringing the 21st Century right to everyone's doorstep. I think what I like most about your work is that one can see how despite how everything has changed so much, he basics are still the same.


  • Grateful
    September 6, 2008

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    i really liked it the way you expressed the episode of this 21 century cyberwold in this poem...and it is growning...all the best...

  • Virgoan silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    i like how you used contemporary words in this piece. cool and keeps my face with a thrilled, soft-spoken smile.

    galing



    • sense surreal
      August 22, 2008
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      Salamat Hensley

      nasulat ko lang to dahil ewan...haha praning lang ako.
      nadisconnect lang ako, nadisconnect na rin yata sya.

      kahit offline msg man lang...

      at sensya ka na rin sa kin.

      Anna Lee


  • Klayer
    August 6, 2008
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    lol! great! I like it. It appels to my nerdy side hehe. Thats well cool!

    XkX

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