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Cloned

Missing image
We're a family of drones
just look into our eyes,
with that inbred look of madness
we try hard to disguise.

Procreating like rabbits
see our latest addition,
the likeness profound
in high definition.

Our derangement is folly
as the rabies grab hold,
listen to nonsensical mutterings
as this new world unfolds.

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credit: the_family_by_Heile

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  • xCandieKissesx
    August 14, 2008

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    Procreating like rabbits
    see our latest addition,
    the likeness profound
    in high definition.

    Wow! Excellent job and congrats on the spotlight!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    No, no no... certainly not cloned! I am sure each one of these people was found under a cactus. Except perhaps for the demented twins in the back - that was the same baby found twice.


  • Desire gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    OMG~


    I saw that picture and was like
    Oy~~~ Excellent!!

    Love the reference to:
    rabies grab hold
    You gave me much to inhale
    from this *family of drones*~

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~

  • carole21
    August 12, 2008

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    nicely penned for the prompt . . liked "with that inbred look of madness" and "listen to nonsensical mutterings" . . congrats on the trophy


  • marlene47 silver member
    August 12, 2008

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    Funny!
    I liked -> the inbred look of madness/we try had to disguise, the latest addition in high definition and nonsensical mutterings/as this new world unfolds. Actually that last part isn't that funny, more like sad. Congratulation on the bronze.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    Interesting work with this picture!
    Congrats to you on your trophy here
    and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • Klayer
    August 11, 2008
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    Hiya me again

    Hope you dont mind with me getting it spotlited

  • Gaurav Saluja
    August 11, 2008

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    hi there
    may be I would be abit harsh on your poetry
    but let me make it clear to you that my aim would be to make you a very good poet by the end of your new entry........so what I wana say is please try and get some connections in the poetry..........it' missing the appropriate flow....still you managed with flawless flow....not hurdled by your own poetry....
    So, I would rate you 5 out of 10
    hope you take my comment positively.....


  • Klayer
    August 6, 2008

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    OOO! OMG thats amasing! And i have only read the first verse!

    Okie red it all! In hight definision ooooo!! I very mutch like this!! Its all perfect from the background to the wonderful picture OMG ITS GREAT!!

    XkX


  • Tattboyspet
    August 6, 2008

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    The rhyming in this one didn't miss a beat, but I personally feel as though it just skimmed the outer edges of what could be seen in that image ... despite the fact that it was a really enjoyable read, there was something missing (but I can't quite put my finger on it )
    thank you for your entry nonetheless

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