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Lost In Thought

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Lost in thought....
forever in visions
magically held in the night
drawn by the invocation of the moon,
Silently whispering....
forever touch my soul,
Reflecting thy memory
only by a smile.

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    may i speak as a friend who truly

    respects and values your poetic style and insights?
    Come back to this poem, it is undone-just a little
    un-ravelled here and there....
    sometimes we dive in too deeply..the words slip through
    our fingers as if we are trying to capture a rivers
    water with our simple of bare hands.
    Beautiful imagery in this poem! It pulls in and
    renews.
    ears/Seattle



  • Klayer
    August 6, 2008
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    Aww i like it! I love the whole moon thing. And the smille at the end makes me happy

    XkX