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an obedient disciple too

A SNIFFER dog  always tries to trace the culprit
Who is real criminal? is to be ascertained
DOG  a symbol for reliance,belief  and trust
but an obedient disciple too

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    August 17, 2008

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    Maybe an obedient disciple and a dogs reliance, belief and trust are one and the same? I suppose depends on what one is a disciple too.