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love in a cup

The scent is tantalising
My mind drifts
A caravan, people talking, the desert
I can taste the aroma
I open my eyes
A cup of coffee, strong and black
Thank you honey
Perfick! In Bed

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  • Saffron gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    This is a nice take on the contest prompt--thank you for writing it for the contest

    Saffron


  • KayJay
    August 6, 2008

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    A tantalizing tale... the images of the coffee smell are as good as the images of your poem ... well done and best of luck...
    Ken