It's easy just stop and remember that everything's bad.
Your a lame excuse for a human being.
Your fat and stupid, you're too self critical,
and you can't grasp social concepts.
you sleep in your head all day
and complain when you get woken up.
Disturbed, you hit the snooze button,
and eventually pull the plug on the clock.
Your distractions aren't working like they used to,
your begging for self realizations.
Every time I open my eyes I see my nose,
with tears my vision blurs and doubles
and with crossed eyes I see four!
Author notes
get it? it's to get you to cry. ha ha
A contest entry
- The last of my points.....for you!! by l33t-n1nj4.
747 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
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Apart from very, very minor typos - excuse me but I am so anal about spelling- I did enjoy this, a lot. Everything's - you're - aren't. Well to continue. I can so relate to the situation you describe so evocatively here. Loved the line 'you sleep in your head all day' that is so me. I like the way this tells such simple story but technically I'm not so sure of the way it ends, the final line seems a tad out of sync with the rest. An interesting and original write, thanks for sharing. Cheers.
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FABULOUS!!! there are not other words...good job
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so whats goin on with this contest
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lol its funny you should ask cause i just got on so I could finish readign all of them. Sorry it's been kind of a crammed week for me havent had alot of time to actually sit down and fairly read and judge
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damn this was good
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