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[ To leave the past behind is like regretting everything you have lived... ]

To leave the past behind is like regretting everything you have lived...
A cold heart has tainted your pure soul
You have been made a prisoner of your own faith
You, always so cheerful, only wanting to be loved
You were taught that love was shared among people
and that power was divided among beast...
Kindly, opening your heart to everyone in need
yet all that love you had before blinded you from this cruel reality...
A sorrowful individual you have become
Your eyes look so distant as if they are frozen
Your body stands still
you eyes looking deeply and contemplating the past
Please i know you have been hurt
people played with you in the before
they treated you as a toy
but there is still hope...
You always believe that all people needed love in order to become pure
and you always gave all you could...
Now its my turn, let me help you regain your faith in people
Let me console you in your loneliest time
Rescue you from your isolated world
You always gave people more chances to change
Now give me a chance to change you back to your old happy and kind self...
Forgive yourself and forget all the pain
Never forget ill always stay beside you
Please give me a chance is all i ask of you
Let me reach your cold heart and turn it into what was once before...
Always forgive never regret
For regretting something means you cannot move forward...

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  • Angelflower
    August 17, 2008

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    This was a really interesting and moving piece.. I really liked where you went with this.. You did a wonderful job on the prompt.. I grealty enjoyed it, thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel