In every way, I seek knowledge.
It stays locked up inside my mind for vantage.
My treasure of knowledge keeps me alive every day.
Analyzing everything before my decisions are made.
Heavy mistakes, knowledge has been sad.
With me having that knowledge treasured back.
My mistakes has not been that bad.
Author notes
Thanks for the great poem you have inspired me to write...
I think I went over the 50 but o well I like the poem the
way it is...
your friend in poetry... Jackreed3
A contest entry
- Knowledge is treasure by Purush.
450 points, ended August 21, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"Heavy mistakes" I can tell you about that.
Good work and good luck in the contest. -
Well said wisdom... the only trap is over analyzing... sometimes you just have to go with your heart... but that's a treasured knowledge too
Well done, Jack... all the best in the contest.
Ken

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ALL THE BEST IN MY CONTEST
My treasure of knowledge keeps me alive every day.
EXCELLENT . Nicely expressed.
ALL THE BEST IN MY CONTEST



