I emerge from shadows
into blinding light,
My chance, at last,
to escape,
phantoms of the night.
Head held high,
chest out, heart,
open wide,
Allowing one more chance
for love to come inside.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
A contest entry
- Light Hearted by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A job very well done
I really like this it is short but gets your feelings out. It's difficult to capture ones imagination with just a few words but you've done it here. A very good write, Boog
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Oh this is really good.. I like the flow of it and how heartflet and intense it is!!! it kind of had a rhythm to it.. like a song I was heard.. hmm, lol. anyway you really did a wonderful job, I really loved this.. there was a lot of strength here.. thank you very much for sharing this.. best of luck in the contest..
Angel
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Beautiful
Michele this is such a beautifully penned poem with such a beautiful meaning... second chance -
a chance to breathe again
a chance to smile again
a chance to feel again
its a chance to live again
if we could give a chance to love again
Only if it was that easy though. but then we'll never know if another chance to love is finding true love unless we open the doors of our heart again... very nice message is a brilliant style - poetry from your heart... good luck in the contest... take care minoo
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