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A Ballad of Death

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The Angel of Death flew out of the dark
Singing a song that brought chills to your heart
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Your skin crawled like that of a snake
As the heat from hell your feet it started to bake
She waled and she shrewd as you blood grew cold
Slowly you arms and your legs started to fold
You fell to your knees as you started to die
Amongst the darkness you let out a cry
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The Angel of Death flew out of the dark
Singing a song that brought chills to your heart
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The moon set a glow as the stars became dark
She gathered your body as she took away your heart
She’s taking your soul to an unholy place
Forever the fear will show on your face
The Angel of Death few back to the dark
Waiting for the next victim to conquer their heart
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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 24, 2008

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    Your sketch with your impressive immageries caught my attention and impressed me with awe..well done indeed...


  • Foxydaze14
    August 11, 2008
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    Good work. A perfect 55!