Listen to me I a wisdom spreading the message to grown ups and children
Mentality philosophy sycologicoly educationaly given
My brains spinning working 7 days a week thinking
My thoughts are high beonyed the sky it's like an angel blinking
Thoughts of determination I will spread knowledge to the nation
So all that negative in the world I am replacing
With lyrical penatration only spoken by a consealer
I can never be the same never follow I'm a leader
This world is going down if I keep this to myself
I would die a 1000 deaths to help everyone else
This life is so amazing while hell's fire keeps blazing
Billionars keep getting money and prices are still raising
Homeless people craving 3 pennies they are saving
I'm getting so pissed I'm about to paint the white house black
Uplifting my community and bringing it all back
Apply all this wisdom because every word is a fact
A contest entry
- Knowledge is treasure by Purush.
450 points, ended August 21, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is sooo creative and a powerful message to humanity,
it is indeed the lack of positive in the word and the abundance of negative that create imbalance,
we are in desperate need of changing the way we think.
God bless...
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between 40 to 50 words"
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