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On Way





Hearts know secrets in silence,
but ears languish to hear voice
of knowledge with words as thought,
to touch the naked body of dreams.

Source of soul must rise and sink
in ocean whispers to weigh unknown
treasures of infinite depth to eyes
to point scales unfolded by truth's petals.
















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Prompt: "Knowledge is treasure"
50 words

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  • Poet-treeman
    August 13, 2008
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    DEEP!

    This is an awesome write and well thought out and expressed. Good luck!


  • Purush
    August 6, 2008

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    "Hearts know secrets in silence,
    but ears languish to hear voice
    of knowledge with words as thought,
    to touch the naked body of dreams."
    OH! GREAT !
    ALL THE BEST IN MY CONTES