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Threads of Life

the silvery threads of life begin
binding this cloth
colors of various designs
weaving  symbols of incidents
through out the folds.
intersecting
at the moments in time
interlocking
history each one
the birth, the childhood,
the adolescents, and
adulthood and elderly
tying off the threads in this
tapestry of life
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • The Azure Flame
    August 7, 2008
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    Very deep and beautiful. Great imagery. Keep writing and God Bless.

  • goalsv
    August 6, 2008
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    Beautiful picture in words, very smooth tone.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Wow..what a masterpiece of a write and background....I have to go now but I will write again to say more...So glad that I came to read this Debilynn...What a write and background! Bravo!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 5, 2008
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    Beautiful extended metaphor, weaving the tapestry of one's life, even tying off the ends!