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"Message from the Reaper"

Let this leap of faith be the last,
Each step taken away from the past.
Meet me on this bridge to no where,
Down in the depths or up through the stair.
Death is nothing but this passage,
Reaper sent to give you this message.
Pay the piper or reap the whirl wind,
This crossroad all life must tend.
Meet me at this road where our paths cross,
Take this leap where death is our final loss.

Author notes

I actually based this poem on a song, though I am not completely sure if this is a appropriate take on the prompt. So, I based this poem on the song, Crossroads, by Bone-thugs-n-harmony, enjoy.

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  • Lute
    August 8, 2008
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    content 7.1
    vocabulary 9
    accuracy 8.3
    creativity 6.2
    theme 6.7
    originality 7

    totals 44.3