I know that times like this are tough enough,
And in consideration of your loss of your
Beloved Betta, Sam, I have prepared funeral
announcements on your behalf:
"As we observe respect for the dead,
We ask that you be respectful also
To the next of kin, or in this case
The next of fin.
The funeral is arranged to be a
Burial at sea;
The service will be conducted
By Rev. Pike.
In lieu of flowers, the family
Requests that you send bait.
Thank you for your support on this trying
And difficult occasion."
And in consideration of your loss of your
Beloved Betta, Sam, I have prepared funeral
announcements on your behalf:
"As we observe respect for the dead,
We ask that you be respectful also
To the next of kin, or in this case
The next of fin.
The funeral is arranged to be a
Burial at sea;
The service will be conducted
By Rev. Pike.
In lieu of flowers, the family
Requests that you send bait.
Thank you for your support on this trying
And difficult occasion."
Author notes
I actually had a betta named Sam - we gave him a burial 'at sea.'
I got the funeral idea from an old TV series 'Benson.'
In a list
A contest entry
- Care Enough To Write The Very Best by NotAMolly.
800 points, ended August 20, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Sure, write a funeral announcement for a fish...
Comments
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Oh how sweet
Our pets mean the world to us all and so sorry to hear of their loss

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Cute card! I like it. I thank you for entering my contest!
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Haha! I had a betta, too, that I shared with my ex-roommate, and I always gagged when she made me change its water. I've no idea if Leo is still alive, but I was definitely glad enough when she wanted to keep him when she moved out.

Anyway. Cute poem & good luck in the contest. It'll definitely beat my entry, for sure.
-hiraeth -
Cool poem. like it. didnt make me laug
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this is delightfulwe too suffered a loss,an angel fish.
very peecious write
God bless my friend...


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Haha, nice write.
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thats so cool. its kind of funny and sad. in one. a strange combination. sorry about your fish. nice write. a complete draw in.

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