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Duet

He:                                    She:

Hold my hands gently.                  Capture my hands. 
Listen to my footsteps                  Notice the waves
stepping lightly beside you;            deliberately leaving
touch me softly                        our footprints untouched.
and know that                          Don't leave,
I'll always be with you.                let me walk with you.
Sing to me lovingly.                    Hum me a lullaby;
Dance with me                          tell me a fairy tale.
and allow me                            Watch me dance,
to hold you in my arms.                and see me fall,
Stay with me willingly,                but lift me up again.
never allow me                          I promise to be
to let you go.                          with you
Promise me.                            forever.




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  • WritingWretch silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    Lovely lyrics

    Great libretto for an operatic duet. The lines intermingle beautifully and each song can stand alone. Very romantic.

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