Marionettes of the darkest life,
Family gone wrong in the light
Turned to their counterpart of night
Portrait taken to capture this parody
What should never have been a mockery,
Turned into a freak show of evil comedy.
A contest entry
- Art by Heile #25 by Tattboyspet.
600 points, ended August 7, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn That Silver Into Gold! by Nicada.
300 points, ended October 8, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You did a nice job relating to the picture prompt in the other contest. So much said in just a few lines. Great job on this poem, and thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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yep ... strangely different and pretty close to what I saw too
You have managed to cram all sorts of insight into only 6 lines of words and to me that is WONDERFUL!!!
thank you for your entry
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