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I don't know really

I don't know
the definition or artifacts of love
what all i know now is
experiencing your grace
and enjoying the grandeur
you bestowed on me My lord!

Where ever I go
you follow me
Extending necessary safe guards

I continue to chant your pious name
not in case of need at all
but at all time I do wake up

Is this respect  shown on you ,
a devotion of a dedicated soul?
is the affection you continue to shower on me
is technically termed as love?

sorry my supreme lord!
I don't know really

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true love...

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Your words are true and very honest scripted by the soul.. I love it ..well done ...my thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem ...


  • ennovy silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    This really a beautiful poem with such honesty written in each line....True love is hard to define for some people and your approach was awesome....novy