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Wisdom's Field

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Love is the schoolmaster

whose lessons aren't forgotten.

They give eyes vision

to see words of light,

clothing in truth's armor.

A shield against darkness,

encouragement's instruction

becomes a passion for knowing.

 

A flame burning a lifetime

in souls treated as gold,

ever seeking wealth

as nuggets from wisdom's field.

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  • Poet-treeman
    August 13, 2008

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    "A flame burning a lifetime". This line is so apropo. I just love it. A heart on fire with love IS the key. Good work and good luck in this contest.

  • carole21
    August 6, 2008

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    very nice

    a very nice inspiring write for the prompt . . liked "clothing in truth's armor" and "as nuggets from wisdom's field" . . good luck in the contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    Oh what a most beautiful take on the prompt. Your pen has certainly poured some wonderful spiritual ink!
    All the best with this
    gaylene


  • Purush
    August 6, 2008

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    ALL THE BEST IN MY CONTEST

    BEAUTIULLY EXPRESSED
    "A flame burning a lifetime"

    in souls treated as gold,

    ever seeking wealth

    as nuggets from wisdom's field." NEATLY WORDED IN APT CONTEXT
    ALL THE BEST IN MY CONTEST


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    this is amazing papa, you are very wise with your words, love the ideas and descriptions. take care and good luck
    Stephanie ♥

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