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But I'm afraid of spiders

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There once was a girl named Diane; she lived in a fairytale land.
With butterflies and dragons and her favorite red wagon.
Most of her days were simply quite grand.

One day she walked through the woods, she knew that her friends were all good.
But there was a spider that once tried to bite her.
She ran away as fast as she could.

Soon she came to a yard with a fence, but no house and that made no sense.
With no gate to invite her she thought bout the spider.
She jumped over that fence so intense.


Once she was inside theof that yard she realized it wasn’t that hard.
So she looked at that spider that had run up beside her.
Said my dragon he will be my guard.

Her dragon jumped right to her aid, as a dragon he wasn’t afraid.
Said he to the spider you cannot come inside here.
And the two of them all day just played.

But soon it would be getting dark, then a firefly came along with a spark.
He soon lit up the night and Diane well she was alright.
Cause the spider was afraid of the dark.


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  • stavykm gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    This is Cute

    What a cute story poem of this precious little girl that you've written out in a poem. Beautiful imagination. Thank you for your entry and best of luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie


  • HisDirtyLiLPoet
    August 5, 2008

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    Ironically, I was just telling a dear friend of mine about being bit by a brown lacruse aka fiddle back spider on my toosh! This poem is quite cute and I'm loving it! Thanks for making me smile -- She-ra