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My Queen Arived On A Scateboard

She was totaly cool 13-year-old girl beautiful
I saw her when I was in the back of my Dad's ford
After one looked at her once I had to thank the lord
I felt like my queen arived on a scateboard
Dude she was on a scate board long hair in a bun
Even though I was young I said "Dad she's the one"
In school she said come here hun you wanna have fun
She said "Race ME!" Then fled off faster then a gun
As I ran after her I thought I was in a blur
It's like she slow down just for me to touch her
Wow what if I kissed her no it would never be
Until the day my queen wanted to skateboard with me
Kelly told me "dude you rock"! so I picked up speed
She just held my hand and allowed me to lead
When we stopped she held my hand tighter and kissed me
My Lord I feel like My Queen Arived On A Scateboard

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  • XxemohatexX
    August 6, 2008
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    dQ you did not read all the rules there is no emos rock in your an so yah i guess this was not inportant enuf to you for you to read all of the little bit i wrote on my conteset tip read everthing


  • XxemohatexX
    August 6, 2008

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    this is realy good and i like how you were not afrade to take a new twist on things good job and good luck


  • Jamaica
    August 5, 2008
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    Hope u like that and I win something. Good contest thank u.