Today...
love echoing between two souls
no fears,
only love,
no doubts,
only now
Now...
All the cherished ones
sitting teary eyed, all bursting with Joy
At last-
Fate
conspired with
Love,
two becoming one
One...
hands reaching for hands
hearts reaching for hearts
eternally bound
by Law,
by Love
Speaking of Love...
let us whisper
lovingly,
tenderly,
Lullabies of Us Forever
Author notes
Jay Jay if you hate it... i'm sorry... I tried.. I really hope you like it!!! I'm just so happy you're happy and getting married I just can't seem to think!
A contest entry
- for my wedding by Eternal Cascade.
600 points, ended August 6, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i didn't realise until after i judged and yr entry showed in my 'new by your favourites' but i really did like it, only the rhyme did it for me well done sweety!! x
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i love it!!
obviously this is someone who knows me as my name is in the author notes...lol, i have no idea who you are but i would like to say what a stunning job you did here, i am stuck at the moment as to which piece (1st or 2nd) will be read and am beginning to think maybe i can get two readings in, i chose 1st over this because i love rhyming poetry and no other reason at all as i feel they are both exceptional pieces!!
i've closed my eyes and imagined my bridesmaid saying these words and they are touching and when i find out who it is i will think of you at the very moment she comes to speak!!
absolutely beautiful
Thankyou so much for entering
Much Love,
JJ x -
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Glad you liked it JayJay thanks bunches for the silver... god I read the gold one... man that one definately blew me out of the water! it was great... personally I dont think this one was up to par... But I'm very happy you liked it. Thanks so much! Enjoy your wedding!
xx
Chelsy
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