Playin underneath the stars
I softly sing with my guitar
as I dream of you tonight
I hold these strings so tight
I'd move mountains to feel your touch
I'd swim oceans to feel that rush
and every drop of color
that sweeps across your eyes
well, I can't show it to you tonight
So I'll fall asleep and dream of you
yeah, just like I always do
but this time I'll hope
and this time I'll dream
cause nothings ever as it seems
I'd move mountains to feel your touch
I'd swim oceans to feel that rush
and every drop of color
that sweeps across your eyes
well, I can't show it to you tonight
In a list
A contest entry
- Remind me there is love in the world by kay772.
400 points, ended November 21, 82 entries
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This is a great poem. It is all so true and very emotional. i like this poem very much. everyone has put in great poems and it will be very hard to choose so good job and good luck. I hope you do well. keep up the good work.
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Though this is a blind contest( i can't see the author) I'm pretty sure youve entered others in my contest
becuase i just read them, i enjoy the fact that your style stays constant
Thank you for entering -
DAMN.. (speechless) id say it was finished honestly seems like it conveys what you ment .. but thats just what i think btw ... wassup?
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This was a good piece. There was imagery which is a plus. Nicely done. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
<3 Vampy -
Gettin' along there Miss Vron. I particularly like the mountains/ocean couplet there. The words make such a nice sound when you say them. I love the sound of words that are put together nicely. Keep going with it too - I want to see what comes next.
H & L
GP
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