Wind blowing through my hair,
I stand here in the woods
And i'm watching
the sun shinning
through the trees,
As i hear the birds singing
a sweet melody on the
broken wet branches
of the morning dew.
Now the glistening
leaves on the ground
are crackling as i walk
along smelling all
the wonderful smells
of the wilderness.
Autumn has came in so
fast and has took
away my breath as it
has done before.
The butterflies are
gone as well as the
hummingbirds and
sweet smelling flowers.
As the sun starts to
rise as the dawn settles
in.
What a glorious
day this will be The wind,
the beautiful colored
flowers, and the trees all
changing colors.
What can i say Autumn
is a beautiful season!
Author notes
I hope it works with the picture.
A contest entry
- Picture inspiration by crazymomma.
400 points, ended November 5, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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wow this is very creative
but can use a little wor -
This is great, blew mine out of the water =D
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Hi Jade
Beautiful poem. I like autumn too. -
well done
very sweet . . . interesting,
i haven't written in a light form in a so long it is so refreshing to read your piece.
I saw spring and you saw autumn and I find that a very interesting conjecture between artists and their contextual reference.
good luck in the contest!
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Thanks for commenting.
I'm glad you got a refreshing feel after you read my peice.
It makes me feel all good inside to know that i have the kind of effect . lol
And yes it is very interesting how 2 different artist paints 2 different pictures of 2 different seasons yet
can be all the same.
I will be return the favor very soon.
-Mandi
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I loved the imagery in this.
Now the glistening
leaves on the ground
are crackling as i walk
along smelling all
the wonderful smells
of the wilderness.
that was my favorite stanza -
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Thanks for comenting.
Im glad you liked this ..
I can tell that stanza has an effect on alot of people
which i like.
Sorry for taking so long to respond . i will return the favor very soon.
-Mandi
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I had to highlight the poem to read it because the font colour is so dark, but it was worth it. Best of luck in the contest.
SJ -
very nice
This trip through the woods was great I could smell the smells you were talking about and feel the leaves cracking under my feet. Very nice, The Shaker
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Thanks for commenting.
Glad you got the effects you did from the piece,
I am so glad i could make the reader feel that way.
sorry it took me so long to respond, i will return the favor very soon.
-Mandi
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This poem paints a beautiful picture in my mind. One so vivid that I can smell the freshness it brings!
SPLEDID JOB!
All the best in the contest!
Becks
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Thanks for commenting dear.
I am glad you got that effect from this peice.
sorry it ttok me so long to respond , and i will return the favor soon.
Thanks again.
-Mandi
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i love how you focused on one season and drew in all its beauty great job
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Thank you for commenting.
I'm glad you liked this piece.
I will return the favor very soon.
-Mandi
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sweet and lovely
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the lines seem awkwardly broken up. I loved how well written it is but the line breaks seem to detract from the beauty of the piece.
"Now the glistening
leaves on ground
are crackling as i walk
along smelling
the wonderful smells
of the wilderness." is my favorite
shiny on
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Thank you for commenting.
Sorry it ook so long to get back to you ..
I am glad you enjoyed this.
-Mandi
I will check out one of your poems soon enough my friend.
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That was beautiful. My favorite season is autumn and I think you just described it the way I've always wanted to. Great! write. S.I.
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Thank you so much .
-Mandi
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Wow. Good luck in this contest. You write beautiful. Fits totally with the picture.
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Thank you very much.
Thanks for taking out time for reading and commenting.
-Mandi
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Momma didn't comment you on this!
Will I will have a word with her..
This is a great poem!! You my sister!
*sigh* Can't beleive that woman didn't comment you!
Such a great poem sis!
Catches the beauty. Always wanted to write a poem like this.
But I never could find the words.
You should be getting a comment from crazymomma.
I'll talk some sence into that woman.
I am her daughter! I can do that kind of stuff. lol
Love
me
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I think she is waiting to make a comment.
Like until she gets more entries. hehe.
But Thank you for commenting.
I'm glad you liked it .
Was something that came to mind when i saw the picture.
-Mandi -
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Oh.
Whhhhy?
But still...
That was a cool pic she has
Btw cool new pic!
and i love your poem on your page
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I don't know. lol
And thank you. I really anjoyed that poem myself .
and the new pic, I absoloutly love butterflies.
It's like an obsession. everytime i see one i have to have it. lol
The pic i have up is my wallpaper on my computer, hehe .
Thanks agian hun,
-Mandi
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