She sits there all alone
Collapsed upon the stairs
She's drowning in self pity
'Cos no one seems to care
Her wrist marked with scratches
Attempts for your attention
She longs to have you love her
She's begging for redemption
Her eyes bleed black
Salty sweet
Her love for you
She cannot keep
You broke her heart
You let her fall
And now your gone
She has lost it all
Give her a light
To guide her way
And bring her to
A better day
For she is torn
And she is broken
Her love for you
Is still unspoken.x
A contest entry
- GET YOUR POEMS OUT THERE by Ken-Maverick.
450 points, ended August 17, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes, new poems, Anything by Never.Give.Up.
525 points, ended September 24, 2008, 104 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awwwwww, this is ss sad
A very strong emotional write
Well done!
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A love unspoken?
Tell him my friend, scratches and wrist marks won't get you the attention you desire but honesty will.
Just like the saying " perfection is not a requirement for love but honesty is" This is something i deeply believe.
I much enjoyed the read and taken to account that this was not a pre-write
All the best in the comp
and hope all goes well for ya
Ken -
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The truth is
I don't have an unspoken love.
I always express how I feel.
Just thought I would write a poem about something like it lOrl.
xo
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