As my fingers move up and down
Always making different sounds
I like to explore the musical rhythms
And the sounds my viola makes
I dream of playing in an orchestra someday
With many others that like to play
I dream of being in chair number one
And playing in front of millions
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Round 2 instructions have been posted. Please see contest page and begin. Good luck.
Lisa -
content 6
vocabulary 8
accuracy 8
creativity 6.4
theme 6.4
originality 6.7
totals 41.5 -
Not a poem -- a diary entry. I don't know a thing about you (meaning your experience, age, etc.) but if you want to attempt to write poetry, I'd suggest you read, read, read some folks who have had some success. Perhaps grab a book called "Good Poems" an anthology put together by Garrison Keillor. Or read some Emily Dickinson ...
Thanks for trying.
Lisa -
okay
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