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Coffin of Life

Nailing in the splintered lie
a broken hope set forth
to die.

A strangled scream
an echoed sound
resonate upon the blooded ground.

Glimpses of eternity
well up in to diamond tears
as the immortal are broken down by
thousands of fears.

Corpses of memory choke
on the hate,
losing in a lethal battle with
death against fate.

Waiting for a single voice
to call,
deprived of hope a
soul begins to fall.

Hearts are reaching out,
then falling through the bloody cuts
of crimson doubt.

I died but am reborn
yet something within is still
ripped up and torn.

Tears weep apologies
if I never said goodbye
but to truly live,
first I'll have to
die...   

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  • The Reaper Beast
    November 19, 2008
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    great

    that is awsome u know u have talent u could be worlds greatest poet =)


  • Ravynna
    September 19, 2008

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    soo awesome

    wow. that was really cool. i like how you said that "to truly live first i'll have to die..." that was really deep. i wish i could write like that


  • Captain Jenny
    September 18, 2008
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    Excellent. I loved every line of it. Great write and thanks for sharing ay