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She Soars...He Waits



Soaring on memories wings,
she finds herself,

dancing through moonbeams
of his love-

safely wrapped in
angelic wings

holding her,
protecting her,

showing her
that even though
they are apart,

that he waits
for her...











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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Lovely

    Yes their is a love that is forever only some have overlooked it and found themselves lost . Yet the truest love waits no matter what


  • Amera gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    I know what this is about and I believe it too. I have a problem though. If I love Tim and he loves me and we will be together forever. What happens to Erick? I love him now to and he loves me.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • StarEyes
      August 10, 2008
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      I have tried to answer that very question, and still don't know.... I guess we will have to wait to find out that answer.


  • Desire gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    This is a Beauty of a piece-
    Love Your emotions that shine through~
    like within all Your verses
    ...angelic wings...Adore those words
    Oy!!! Woooot!!!


    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 6, 2008
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    ohhh this is wonderful. Such depth in feelings. Very well done.

    • StarEyes
      August 7, 2008
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      WOW! Thanks for the bronze! I didn't think this was that great Yep you know what I was thinking about

      and love

      Nyetta

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