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One Moment In Time

One moment in time,

  What will it bring?

One moment in time,

  What can it mean?

 

Think again before,

  One thinks of does.

One could bring love,

  Or hate with what one does.

 

What could the odds be,

  What could possible bring?

Sorrow to those above,

  Tears and regret to those below.

 

The shaking and twisting,

  One does as they go,

Doing just what one pleases,

  Think of someone who needs the help of you.

 

One moment in time is still all it takes.

  Think of the goodness one can make.

One moment in time... think what it means.

  It means the difference of what...one life can bring.

 

8-18-2004

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  • Eternal Pain
    August 16

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    AWESOME

    You expressed how a moment in time could mean to me. This is such a great write, you deserved your spotlight

  • rooftop-writer
    August 16

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    Excellent

    I like how you bring out the idea that each moment in life is much more important than it seems. I couldn't agree more.

  • poetryality silver member
    August 15
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    YEAH!

    It's about time they spotlighted your precious words. This poem is uplifting and ever so true. Life is fleeting! A simple vapor is our example of how quickly we come and go. Yes, yes..."it only takes one moment to make a difference".

    You, my dear friend, have just made a difference in my life. Excellent work and congrats on being in the spotlight!


    Always ♥

    Renee

  • ooo you got a spotlighted poem I am sooo proud...


  • JBudRos
    August 14

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    definatley makes you slow done to make shure every moment in time is just right...bravo 2 clappy faces


  • Legend silver member
    August 14
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    well worth the read .
    who can tell the consequences of that single moment


  • cbizzle
    August 14

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    Yeah, now Im really self contious trying to make sure that everything I do is right, great poem !m!(>.<)!m!

  • crimsondew silver member
    August 12

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    One moment in time is all what is needed..how true!
    simply a beautiful poem with a more beautiful message...everyone should read this!

  • Great job loved it moments can make the world of difference even change the world its for the moments we live. ! Horray

  • Katie Lazette
    August 5

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    Wonderful poem, truth in every word you write. This is well written Mac...Gives one something to think about. Keep up the good writing...Katie

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