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There once was a showgirl from Cleeves
Who contracted a shrinking disease
As she quickly reduced
Her Doctor deduced
That she'd soon be performing with fleas ! 

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  • This was good and pretty funny! I found this interesting. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.

  • haha, what a short but sad little story told here. this was actually a really enjoyable write and it brought laughter out of me. What a poor, wretched girl. What a horrible doctor. He probably gave it to him. This is the type of poetry that stays in your mind for quite a while. Short and simple yet very good. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck.

    Josh


  • Kathraina silver member
    March 29
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    Aww that poor girl!
    Fantastic write!
    Bravo!!!


    ♥ Kate


  • TabbyCat
    December 10, 2008

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    You
    ve really got a knack for writing lymericks! Very cute, nd extremely entertaining. The rhyme is natural and original all at once. Well done! I smiled...and that's something, these days!

  • Topnotchsy
    August 6, 2008
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    Haha, nice witty poem.

  • piccola silver member
    August 5, 2008
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    This is cute! Nice rhyme and cute story. thank you for entering.

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