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Lip gloss.


Number one, we were so young.
Number two, this one's for you.
We had the time of our life,
we promised to be true,
there would only be you,
no other girl would do.
They couldn't kiss like you.
Your lips tasted like Candy floss,
It was your cherry lip gloss,
when I kissed your lips,
I never wanted it to end,
you and me,
girl, boy friend.
I liked your kisses then,
and still enjoy today,
your lip gloss,you wear no more,
your kisses are like before,
more fuller today,
sexy in every way.

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  • Frodofan
    August 5, 2008

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    Sexy... well that's certainly an unromantic word to finish off with. How about something a little more romantic?

    Not bad. Could be a little smoother.

    Thanks for entering.