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The Engler Brothers

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The brothers Engler, Berlin born, and two full years apart,

Blond and healthy, strong and bold, and dear to mother’s heart.

They grew together, fought and played as all young brothers do,

And what the future held for them was something no one knew.

Kurt, the eldest, born the year that ended World War one,

His brother, Klaus, came two years hence, the second Engler son.

The Beer Putsch came and Hitler spent his next years in a cell,

And Stalin swept to Russian pow’r when mighty Lenin fell.

The brothers, strong and Aryan, now felt the Reichmark’s fall.

The elder Kurt, a fatalist, who one day would recall

His younger brother’s anger at the League of Nation’s rules

That seemed to treat Germanic men as egotists and fools

Was now resigned to what befell the nation of his birth,

And seemed somehow to realize that of all lands on earth,

The homeland where each man is born is sacred and unique,

And stirs the hearts of native born, with patriot’s mystique.

But brother Klaus was stirred by words he heard said o’er and o’er.

Mein Kampf, that Hitler wrote while he was still a prisoner

Inflamed the younger Engler and transformed the life he led –

"A nazi I will always be, until the day I’m dead."

Transfixed he was by pageantry and jack-boot’s rhythmic beat.

Enthralled by waving banners and the counterfeit aesthete.

He snickered at naivete his brother seemed to show,

Pretentious was the swagger of his braggadocio.

And so two brothers, nearly twins, or so it seemed to most,

Were headed north to Lubeck on the German Baltic coast.

And there they saw the submarines, and each one had a dream,

They’d fight for very diff’rent goals, at opposite extremes.

The two of them afraid of heights, the luftwaffe lost out,

The submarines that they had seen left them with no doubt,

They signed and they were quickly in, assigned to their own boat,

They sailed away from Lubeck’s pens, to places far remote.

The U-572 that sailed from Trondheim on that day,

With Heinz Hirsacker at the helm had gotten underway

With two young brothers in the crew of 44 it held,

To battles that none had foreseen and were unparalleled.

They cruised the seas on dark patrol, and quiet filled the air

As tired and cramped and busy men bore all that they could bear,

And when submerged, they hunt their prey, and one by one they know

That if it’s found they’ll load the tubes and send it down below.

The Engler boys are thoughtful here and oft lay in their racks,

And think of home and memories . . . and what the other lacks,

For what each seeks by being here is not a common thread,

But each still knows the diff’rent goals that fill the other’s head.

Klaus the younger quick to say, "sieg heil," and then salute,

With hatred of oppressing foes, his will so resolute.

He dreams of killing, sinking ships, of gaining some revenge,

For wrongs that Hitler says were done, he’s trying to avenge.

The elder Kurt, a pacifist, who’s only seeking peace

Is helping sink the allies ships in hopes the war will cease.

His heart is rent with ev’ry shot that somehow scores a hit,

And every thought the brother has, his are the opposite.

But in the world of submarines, sometimes the tables turn,

A lesson for the 44 that each of them must learn.

In chilling cold they slowly drift, as though a reckoning

Awaits them each and ev’ry one from sonar’s eerie ping.

A fear that’s like none other as they’re trapped beneath the sea.,

At o’er 2oo meters down there’s no way they can flea.

They listen for the deadly splash as depth charge seeks them out,

And whether this is all worthwhile now fills their minds with doubt.

For death traverses overhead, the sound of thrashing screws

Echoes through their silent hull and numbs the weary crew.

A mighty blast, a rending shake, the men all hold their breath,

The boat still whole, this time has passed with its impending death.

And thus the Englers and the crew are held like captives here.

Times of triumph followed by those times of abject fear.

These opposites together fight the pitied/hated foe

While huddled in that ice cold steel, sequestered down below.

Author notes

I enjoy writing about history and since I spent my high school years reading about second world war submarines, this seemed very appropriate.

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  • Melodies gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Finely said, good poet. Lines of history written with the heart of a poet. I tip my hat to you.


  • Ishtar
    September 4, 2008

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    ! Now if all my highschool history lessons were written like this, I won't have had any detentions of talking in class, falling asleep in class and for making snide remarks in class. If only.

    This is awesome, Paul. Then again, when isn't your stuff awesome?

    <3


  • grannyeri gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Great poem - my dad was in a U Boat in the war and was captured on his first trip out into the English channel. Brought to Canada as a POW for the whole war - best thing that could have happened to him. He brought my mother and me and my sister to Canada in 1951, but died in a car accident 7 years later, leaving behind 6 kids to be raised by his widow.
    Enjoyed this read.


  • CaliOkie silver member
    August 18, 2008
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    Excellent. Iron coffins of German youth. So well written. Good luck in the contest.

    Garrison


  • suseann silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    BRAVO !

    What a poetically talented and profound piece of truism this is! This author is world class masterful in abilities and this is solid proof of my assumtion.I'm duly impressed.


  • Legend silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    It is so hard to tell a tale(especially one of war) in rhyme. Though when it is done as well as this one then one really does start to enjoy the historical side of life.I can well understand the youth of Germany being drawn into the what seemed glorious side of the Nazi party What with the parades and songs of glory not to mention the uniforms. When i was stationed in Germany in the early sixties it seemed to me that everyone from the postman to the roadsweepers had military styled uniforms
    A great flowing poem and a pleasure to have read


  • Griswold gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    A wonderful piece of work, so much different than mine but the same as well. Excellent job, best of luck...Scott


  • Veronica Leigh
    August 5, 2008

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    You are so amazing. This is gorgeous! So sad, but you wrote it so beautifully and really made it ridiculously interesting. Wonderful job as always. You still have MUCH to teach me. haha


  • Gatlianne
    August 5, 2008
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    applause applause

    I don't know how you do it but good you are at what you do


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    August 5, 2008

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    WOW. You HAVE to be the best poet on allpoetry. I am always so impressed with your abilities. This is exactly what I was searching for! It shows the emotions and the goals, the character and the attitudes and linking them as brothers is pure genius! Were these characters taken from real life people? If so were they on U-572? And that leads me to my next question...can I mention these young men as distant characters in my current writing endeavor? Perhaps as crew members under the command of my main character?

  • GoneAMinute
    August 5, 2008

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    Whether its writing about babies or houses or history you always manage to make everything work, you truly are talented and I respect you even more for that. You have a way to capture a reader and in a way teach them a thing or two. Great job!


  • Electric Sunrise Moderators member
    August 5, 2008

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    I loved it, but then i studied WW2 indepth in college so was quite pleased with known what the Beer Putsch was

    Have you ever read Mein Kampf? It's an interesting read into his psyche (although the translation into english may have lost some of his sentiments)

    Rhyme scheme was flawless and the read actually not only enjoyable but educational.

    Paul, your a pleasure to read and to know.
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