WALK with me in love.
TALK to me about what you cannot say to others.
LAUGH with me even when you feel silly.
CRY with me when you are most upset.
SHARE with me all the beautiful things in life.
FIGHT with me against all the ugly things in life.
CREATE with me dreams will follow.
Have FUN with me in whatever we do.
WORK with me towards common goals.
DANCE with me to the rhythm of our love.
A contest entry
- for my wedding by Eternal Cascade.
600 points, ended August 6, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great write here! I love how you emphasized certain words. it really makes this piece more memorable. Best of luck in the contest.
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excellent!!!
i love the way you have capitalised the singular words that for me are the most important things in any relationship and then gone on to elaborate also, its a very true write and many infact the whole world should be able to relate to it, well done!!
thankyou so much for entering i loved it!!
Much Love,
JJ x
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