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Ethereal Beings Flood Their Eyes

Ethereal beings flood their eyes.
A precious gift lost they realize.
For she decided to touch me,
Amazing love could it be.

Seeing the flood, God listened.
My heart, drowning, did pray.
Blinded by touch, love glistened.
Heart, hoping: "God let her stay."

Her hand upon my heart,
I suffer gently.
Wanting not pain to start,
Praying vehemetly.

Ethereal beings flood their eyes.
A precious gift lost they realize.
Amazing love could it be,
A being as her with me.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    You are sketching the depth of the prompt with your own soul..wonderful indeed... I love it ..well done my friend...


  • CelticQueen
    August 5, 2008
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    The word is ethereal. celtic queen


  • ennovy silver member
    August 5, 2008
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    Beautifully Penned

    beautiful metaphors and some
    very deep thoughts of love,
    wanting to be loved....novy