The sun shines through the clouds,
as if from heaven above.
What a beautiful sight
on this early spring morning.
God's grace gives us this sight,
makes us ponder our lives.
Why are we here?
What are we to do?
A contest entry
- Contest Quickie for a Quickie PIF #108 12 Poets /40 words by Roaddog Wolf by Roaddog Wolf.
550 points, ended August 7, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nicely penned take on the prompt, ......
......Thank you for your entry into my contest and good luck in the judging.

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Hmmm. I find the ending a little puzzling but the majority of this poem I find extremely beautiful. You wrote this with good optimism and grace. Thanks for sharing it.
Brian

