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Sunshine

The sun shines through the clouds,
as if from heaven above.
What a beautiful sight
on this early spring morning.

God's grace gives us this sight,
makes us ponder our lives.
Why are we here?
What are we to do?

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    August 6, 2008

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    nicely penned take on the prompt, ......
    ......Thank you for your entry into my contest and good luck in the judging.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    Hmmm. I find the ending a little puzzling but the majority of this poem I find extremely beautiful. You wrote this with good optimism and grace. Thanks for sharing it.
    Brian