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My new companion

I would like a friend to hug
To love and hold and not to bug
They know whats right but try the worst
i would like to be the first

Even if they cant talk a word
Its my friend, dog or bird
They may not listen or talk to me
but its my life, well mostly

Its just as good as any pet
And it was special the first time we met
Id like to take the time to say
that this is my friend from day to day

So if you want to find a friend
then get someone that you can depend
cause if they learn to take the care
You both will be the best of pairs

A contest entry

wheres your friend

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  • ChantelStone
    August 6, 2008

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    amazing

    wow... that was lovely! i see i have serious competition on here now.... and i'm related to them...haha Well done!


  • polly filla
    August 6, 2008

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    this is different, considering the rest in the contest; you've taken a different angle, yet one just as clear

    somehow, this is sadder than describing the horrors of life, for it highlights through the beauty

    cute, as well. Thanks for entering