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My Lady, My Love (unfinished)

Eyes downcast
Breath comes quicker
"Thank you, My Lady,"
You begin to shiver

I move towards you
Reward of a kiss
Your eyes beseech more
Yet you are dismissed

Ever the flawless supplicant
You kneel, awaiting my command
Always eager for perfection
My displeasure you shall withstand

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