As the clouds collide,
a ring is formed,
penatrated by light;
His light.
The light of hope,
of strength, of power,
of wisdom, of gracefulness,
of love and of tolerance!
His Light!
And it shines
and bathes
ALL of US!
by: Nada Adel Sobhi
A contest entry
- Contest Quickie for a Quickie PIF #108 12 Poets /40 words by Roaddog Wolf by Roaddog Wolf.
550 points, ended August 7, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Let us Praise his Name by Jburrus.
700 points, ended March 26, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good Work
I really liked the poem. THank you for entering.
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Outstanding
This is both powerful and spiritual a real poem about faith and how important it is in our lives. Poems about God can get a bit cliched but I thought this was full of originality and color. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very strong display of faith in God penned behind the words in this write, which I assume is the major purpose behind your writing this, passing the word of God and you did a fine job doing that.
Thank you for your entry into my contest and good luck in the judging. -
amazing
Amazing take on the prompt =D
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