Weak and tired, I beg to return home;
Not to be trapped in this feeling forever;
No longer here shivering, left all alone.
Your beautiful face haunts my dreams,
Stirring me, enticing me to run to you.
Everything isn't as it easy as it seems.
Although time alone erases what it can,
Sometimes not everything has to disappear.
Scars left behind were part of your plan.
Your never-ending light once set me free.
We soared the forest together, ran away;
Free of any nightmares that came for me.
Now that welcoming light seems so distant,
Trying to remember your stone chiseled face.
I've begun to believe it was all nonexistent.
The memories make it difficult to tell
Myself you're coven is no longer around.
I curl up, storing it all inside a shell.
With my arms I clench my hole tight,
Compacting all the pain trapped inside
I don't want to bleed anymore tonight.
My voice calls your name in the night,
Knowing the worst had already come.
He then scared them away without a fight.
Defeated, the heavy tears began to fall.
A warm, strong finger wipes them away.
He takes care of me like a porcelain doll.
I listen closely in my broken heart,
Where the voice will be remembered most,
I'll always have you, till my death do us part.
In my times of idiocy, I wait to hear;
My body cannot help but chase your voice,
As it screams at me; filled with fear.
Though your angelic voice remains inside,
Echoing constantly through my empty mind.
Your being here all along seemed just a lie.
During my sleepless nights brought on by you;
I fight to resist the pain anymore.
My severed heart as been torn in two.
This new warmth comforts me, awakens me;
Drug me out of my familiar sea of dark.
Is this how the ending is supposed to be?
Author notes
Freeverse (Contest)
"Ladybug lands on lee" (Contest)
A contest entry
- What's Your Favorite Twilight Book? by soccer220.
600 points, ended August 25, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Twilight by Maili Knephthan.
650 points, ended October 27, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mt Dew N Syco Things by burningchild.
592 points, ended November 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Your Heart Desires by Rhapsody.
550 points, ended December 27, 2008, 98 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm gunna give you points for your poems! by SmartBrick.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice!Great poem!
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awesome
I LOVE THAT AND I DONT THINK THERES IS ANYTHING ELSE HAS COME CLOSE TO THAT
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Oh my goodness! Thank you so much! -^^- teehee!
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Of course, twilight. This is good. Just write something about YOU next time. I love twilight, just the books by themselves though.
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Well, you did say anything, so I'm sorry that it wasn't specifically about 'me.' Thanks for the comment, though.
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very good
i like this poem. its rlly good. it shows emotion and it appeals to the heart
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excellent~
Loved the way you penned this
I entered too and do hope you come read mine as well
Nice to meet you by the way and best of luck in the contest
Susan~~~
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I will most certainly read yours! And thank you so much! ^.^
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wow....
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This is very cool, good job! I love the twilight series. Very good!
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I really like this. It read like the book in so many ways even though it was shorter. I could feel from the poem what I felt from the book. Thank you for the entry thank you for sharing
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Thank you so much! ^.^
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Hi I was wondering would I be able to use this poem for an english assignment I'm currently doing?
I think its great. and I'm sort of doing a theme around the twilight series. And i need poems. If I can would I be able to have your name so I can give you credit..
thanks heaps
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Wow...I am flattered you asked me this! If you don't mind me askin, whats the project about?
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i love this. you did a fantastic job.
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Awww!!!! I love it nee-chan. You have such a way with expressing things! ^^
one thing... you spelled stirring wrong in the 5th line. Figures. lol. jkjk dont kill me.
Anyways,
Love it! Freaking awesome!
It sux we are up against each other in this contest. T_T
love you nee-chan!
~Onee-chan~
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Thank you onee-chan ^^v
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Wow...this is beautiful!! I love how you take the reader from Bella losing Edward to finding Jacob. Your rhyming is great, it doesn't sound forced at all. You can pratically feel the pain that Bella feels when Edward leaver her. I would recommend that you put [Bella & Edward/Jacob] in the author's notes so it doesn't clutter up the title, but that is your personal preference. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much! Good luck to all contestants!
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