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Broken heart

My love, My heart, My man.
We were in love, so grand and so new.
We have cared for each other since our relationship began.
You broke my heart with words so few.
You turned my sunny skies to blue.
You darkened the clouds and crushed my spirit.
We talked on the phone and I couldn't say a word.
I couldn't speak I was crushed so badly.
That day you ripped out my heart and tore it into pieces.
Your moving away and taking half of me with you.
I was happy when I was with you and lonely now that your gone.
I lay in the shadows while everyone else is in the light.
How could you do this to the one you were suppose to love?
When I told you that I loved you those weren't just words.
That phrase comes with a whole load of emotions with it.
My heart filled with joy every time you uttered I love you.
When you said it was over I new you weren't coming back.
That day apart of me died with those words.
I understand you were going through things and this kind of stuff happens,
But that doesn't fix the pain.
I will always love you. , please remember that.
I hope one day that maybe you will feel the same way that you felt before.
No tears will come out. I can't cry anymore.
You dried up my heart until it turned to dust and only will your love bring it back to life.
I don't want any other man but you.
In time I will move on, but no one can fill the void that's in my heart but you.
Please come back to me.
I'm here when you need me.
I love you.
My love, My heart, My friend.

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  • LittleDecoy
    August 20, 2008

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    i LOVED this.
    it pretty much nailed everything down i was going through to a T. the only difference is i never told him i loved him because i knew he didn't feel the same.....
    awesome write.. thanks SOO much for entering & good luck!