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I Am Thankful


 

Through all the laughter, smiles and tears
we have walked this path of friendships glow.

Sat through some long dark nights
breaking days into golden sunlight.

A million words I hold in my heart
all the things I want to say with love.

Wrapped up in celebrations satin ribbons
one simple exquisite, elegant, red rose.

Reflecting a soul as beautiful as you
for all you mean to me, girlfriend.

There, when it goes beyond words
I am thankful we are friends.

Supportive of our created masterpieces
inspiring that muse to dance across the page.

Keeping the focus , true to our self
appreciate you always my good bad girl.

 

 

Dedicated to my 'Border Queen'  Jeannie D 

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I want to thank you, my good bad girl, for your poetry a pleasure to read, your beautiful borders that inspire me but most of all for being my friend. June will agree we good bad girls stand toe to toe.
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  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    I so enjoyed this poem, a wonderful dedication to a wonderful lady...I was completely captured and felt real emotion was expressed right through...

    Engaging, with soft and endearing thoughts composed within every line...congratulations on the HM

    Love and smiles ~Lilac

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  • Desire gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Bandits United!!

    Aaaaaaaaaaw this is Precious and spoken from the Heart! Wowzers!!
    Love it and I imagine this brought a HUGE smile upon Jeannie's face~ she is Border Queen
    Congratulations on Your HM!!
    Wooooooo Hoooooooo!!
    (throws some serious confetti)

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Love that border- Beauty!!
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 14, 2008

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    i am thankful i got to read this poem and share in the smile i am sure it gave the person it was meant for keep it flowing and congrads in the contest

  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    I love this poem! It is superbly crafted and it's for Jeannie, my sis and dear friend on ap.
    The sentiments in this poem fit her perfectly!


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandit United!

    This is a lovely tribute poem and i really like the fact that it is written in couplets. It give the thoughts and ideas behind them a boost, and a pause between thoughts. Lovely background to compliment your words. Write On!

    You have been Spotlighted by your Poetic Bandit Family today because WE CARE!

    Brother Dennis


  • ml12
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    I thought that the second stanza was absolutely amazing and I commend you on that. This person obviously means a lot to you because it comes through so strong with each of your words. Bravo!


  • The Hermit
    November 14, 2008
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    BANDTS UNITED!

    Great write from a great leader.


  • Sandra R Reynolds silver member
    November 14, 2008
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    Bandit United

    Great write and a good friend to have.


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    BANDITS UNITED!!!

    You have beautifully with vivid words expressed your love for your dear friend. Enjoy your day in the spotlight, fellow Bandit!


  • Room without doors gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    This is a lovely tribute poem to a fellow poet. The imagery is well-chosen and celebrates love and friendship. I liked the flow of this poem, your choice of language and the poignant message. Thank you for posting.


  • azure85 gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    BANDITS UNITED

    A really cool poem of dedication, full of the meaning of friendship and what it means to you both.


  • Lady Altheia
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United

    I love reading dedications. It gives a first hand view of how one person sees another. Congratulations on the trophy. All the best luck on oyour future writes.

  • tawk gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    wow what a wonderful tribute to Jeannie D she is such a caring and loving person whom I am proud to call my friend. What a beautiful background she created. Your poem was so beautiful I know Jeannie will love it. Hope you enjoy your day in the spotlight. hugs Theresa


  • LittleAnn
    November 14, 2008

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    BANDITS UNITED !

    What a lovely poem expressing friendship and admiration. This was such a pleasant read, easy to understand without unnecessary complicated words.
    Thanks for sharing this and coongrats on the HM!

    Keep on writing!
    Annie


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United. This is your day in the spotlight, enjoy. Lovely presentation for this poem - sidebar of roses, red colors, background, picture and poem, colors too. Really lovely verses to express your sentiments and feelings about this special AP poet.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United

    What a beautiful expression of friendship, if only the world had more true dedications such as this. We are a reflection of the company we keep, seems you are both lucky to have each other. Best to you and congratulations on your green trophy.


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    This put a smile on my face hunni; I haven't smiled in a couple days but this was so beautiful and caring I just couldn't stop myself

    One of the loviest poems ever


    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda


  • paperparadox silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    A fitting tribute for a good friend in poetry. And what lady doesn't love a beautiful red rose?

    Lovely jubbly! Here's hoping you enjoy your day to shine brightly in our Spotlight.


  • Twinstar
    November 13, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    What a beautiful tribute to a friend. Filled with love and admiration, and shows the spirit of true friendship. Very well crafted, and a pleasure to read...

    Love & Light
    Debbera


  • Melodies gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    BANDITS UNITED!

    Sweetly said, good poet! This poem should come with a bouquet of roses and a box of chocolates. I love such splendid poems.


  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 13, 2008

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    Bandits United!

    This is a darling poem I really like the words of dedication that you pen so sweetly in this piece congratulations on a well deserved HM, I'm sure this piece was loved!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • debilynn gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Bandits United!!!

    a wonderful tribute to a special lady. well deserving. thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us. keep writing poet. God bless you always


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    How could I not guess even before the last line who the lovely write was about dc...Beautiful lines not forced...just from your heart to hers!Beautiful!


  • Roaddog Wolf gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    very pretty tribute poem

    well written piece ,"Wrapped up in celebrations satin ribbons
    one simple exquisite, elegant, red rose.

    Reflecting a soul as beautiful as you
    for all you mean to me, girlfriend." liked those lines most , good write


  • Poetryintheblood silver member
    August 15, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful dedication, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    What a beautiful write for treasured friends. I wish you all the best with this heartfelt entry
    Gaylene


  • rustynite silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    Colorful to say the least. smile. I stepped into a girlfriend moment. Almost like being at work. Understand perfectly. An emotional write for friends.
    I'll pour the coffee, sit quietly and pet the cat. smile.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 5, 2008

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    Timing is everything, and you have it. This is a beautiful tribute. True friends are there in darkness and light, good times and bad. This has touched me deeply. You never cease to amaze me. You are a true blessing to know and I am so honored to be your friend, AND one of the good bad girls

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