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Dreams Often Tell the Future, We just Chose Not to pay attention

Tell me it's over
Tell me that it's done
Tell me that you don't love me
Tell me that I am not the one
I can feel it drawing nearer
I can sense it, that feeling
The end is close
In this hand that the cards are dealing

Was this love a hoax
Can you sense it too
I am on my knees kneeling
Praying that you still love me
And won't leave me alone
In this emotionless cruel cold world
Known as planet earth-
My home

My eyes are open but I am dreaming
I want to numb this feeling
Known as a broken heart
I feel like I am still attached to you
A story written, a picture painted
What a fine art found within me

Will you let go, let me drown?
I was the princess I wore the crown
Perfect as it seemed
Can you honestly tell me that you don't love me?

Let go of my hand
I don't need you to hold it anymore
If you don't love me
Why do you open the door?
Let me know what lies within your mind
Look inside and what do you truly find?

Can't you see that I still care?
Even though I am not perfect
And you are unaware
The answer is here written in ink
You and I lovers so distinct
Don't make me cry a thousand years
Drowning my sorrows within my tears

Take me back one last time
Look into my heart and tell me what you find
Tell me that you love me
And look into my eyes
Be not ashamed
For lovers unwanted become a fool
My chest is in peril
Because you have my heart in chains

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this is for a contest
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7.lost that believe in love, or losing that feeling of love...whatever the reason be

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    December 16, 2008

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    Heart in chains, what a predicament, that is so shared by so many, no doubt, thanks for your entry


  • poetic-enigma21
    August 6, 2008
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    very nice, only that old my hand , should be hold my hand
    anyways not a problem. this piece depicts that the writter hasnt lost that feeling but the person who he or she loves has ...
    nice angle to the prompt
    thanks for sharing
    i really like it
    good luck
    cheers
    shilpa