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O you, who are love!





Blessed you are
who have created dazzle
'cause without aurora it scrabble
get lost
source of any light.

Blessed you are
who have created life
'cause life procreates progress
effort and joy to see work
in the hands.

Blessed you one
who have created love,
'cause true love brings closer to us
Of God..
'cause any true love is creative.

O you, who are love!












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Prompt: A single touch of true love is a prayer to God...Unknown

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    how musical the words of yours opening the muystery of HIS wqorld in such a wonderful way... my thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem and entering my contest....


  • ennovy silver member
    August 5, 2008
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    What a awesome poem so full of visual
    moments of love...You did a wonderful
    write.....novy


  • onesugar gold member
    August 5, 2008
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    A beautiful take on the prompt

    ~sugar~