smiling words
empty hearts
paradise lost
in tomorrow’s shroud
of yesterday’s tears.
Author notes
Original art in border is by Bill Stephens.
The border is another creation from my 'Border Queen', Jeannie D.
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short but sweet very nice
"smiling words
empty hearts
paradise lost
in tomorrow’s shroud
of yesterday’s tears."........
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good write I like it, nice border too, pretty picture
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oh that's cool^^
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Exquisite Write
Amazing what we can uncover with a few words isn't it? It is the love we hold dear in our hearts despite the separation upliftment of joy vs. sorrow. And I love the picture of what appears to be the tree of life. At first I saw the dark versus light, two sides to life, then the light shining through the tree and at last the hand reaching for the apple. Enjoyed this very much.
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This came across to me as a really sad write of loss. The memories are there and can haunt us at times, no matter how wonderful they were.
Thank you for sharing your talent
Gaylene
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WOW!! This speaks to this border incredibly well!
Your insightfulness (I think I made up a new word!
) is enviable as well as your talent. You are a true and natural poetess.
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