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Good Thing I'm Patient

Your heart is in the right place,
but your choices perplex me.
It's ok. I love you.
I'll stand-by, paused, hoping
while you fall in love all over again.

Why are boys so silly?

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  • Its all because they cant really express themseleves and those that can don't know the reaction they will get because so they try to act like they don't care. Thats my situtions here lately anyway. This is amazing! Keep it up!


  • SignifyingNothing
    August 13, 2008
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    I think this is easy to relate too. It is sad, but hopeful at the same time. Just a person watching someone they love falling in love with other people, but patiently waiting, despite the frustration. Too bad 'boys' don't get any less 'silly' when they get older. Very sweet poem.


  • written-in-ink
    August 12, 2008

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    wow

    really good!

    i think my boyfriend should hear this...
    he would say the same thing about me...

    and boys are silly becasue girls are too

    at least i am....