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Gem

He gave me a precious gem
I held her in my hand
Dropped her in the mud
Now she is lost
And gone forever

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  • stavykm gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    Oh This Is Sad

    Such a short poem but so very sad. Gee I haven't seen you write like this before. Anyways you are a fabulous poet and you show your love for her by calling her a precious gem. I feel sorry for the one that dropped her in the mud and now has lost her forever. Excellent story with so few words. Thank you for sharing with me. I've missed you here on the site lately. I haven't been on as much either.
    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie